Comment on the clarity of the project rationale. To what extend have the aims and objectives of the project has been clearly stated?
Aims
- To design a make up set.
- To have a feminist context.
- To involve pattern design.
'Production' of a make up bag? - has a clear idea of what would take to achieve.
Comment on the identified themes and subjects outlined in the proposal. To what extent do they offer sufficient scope for research and development of significant/appropriate content?
- Feminism (make up) - defending women's/men's freedom of choice to wear makeup.
- Looking towards existing feminist opinions to help form own opinion.
Lipstick feminism - feminism that isn't just anti things feminine.
Comment on the proposed practical and conceptual application outlined in the proposal. Is it clear and does it offer the potential to develop a significant body of work.
Proposing to:
- Design a makeup bag and make!
- Design packaging for products inside (range) - propose!
- Potential to design for a whole range of beauty products/typically girly products: The Pill packaging, Tea- towels, Flanels, Pads/tampon packaging, bra packaging etc.
How will designs communicate this feminism?
Yes definitely a good topic - its of research already gathered for it. - good concepts.
Comment on the breadth and appropriateness of the contextual references. To what extent are they informing the decisions regarding product, range and methods of distribution?
- Existing feminist commentary, art and design to help form an opinion.
- Seems good!
- That per on that tried to reclaim the C word?
- Nicki Minaj reclaiming Bossy making the word have equally good connotations for females.
- Expand on this idea of mocking; using lots of really girly imagery.
Comment on the proposed project plan. To what extent is the plan realistic with regards to workload and timescale?
- This sounds perfectly doable with regard to production of an actual product
- Sewing? Learn how to and if you can make tho
- Learn your limitations of what you can produce so that you can work around those and use them to your advantage.
- Design and production of bag should be possible providing materials and processes have been explored in advance.
- Other designs rest on finishing bag within set time limits.
Additional Comments and Suggestions
- Looks to be a strong opinionated and poignant concept relevant to the times we live in where personal identity has never been so much explored before.
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